The big frustrating day

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                                                      The big frustrating day

Finally We arrived at Auckland mum said get the Gps and type Auckland city Quay street 172

I replied yes.

When we were there my mum said let's do some shopping because the boys will arrive there in 8 hours.  After shopping, we packed them in the car. Then I said” the shopping was humongous. Again I said” that felt like we we're in there for a long time.  After hour and hours we had a sleep. I woke up and said to my mum I fort you went to sleep that didn't even feel long it just felt like a cat nap. I just felt like I closed my eyes and open them  mum replied get up now it time to go. Then on the way we were going to the bus stop I said look a blocked road

My mum said why is there a blocked I said”. Oh no but  there's a little path there we drove thru and then. It just led us back we were getting worried.  After like 8 times of going down the path I was running out of patience. I felt like I was a time bomb about to explode I felt irritated. Then  we just realized we could  go around  I said it was like they did a troll on us but when we were at the bus

stop. we had to wait for ever. I  couldn't wait to see them I had butterflies in my stomach. Then finally there here I was ecstatic

my eyes sparkled with joy. From last time saw them there still the same looking.  That was a frustrating day.