Persuasive writing

WALT write Persuasive writing about what were are learn
to be successful: I will listen in lesson search on google
what I found hard was my reasons
what I found easy was my summary

IN my opinion I think people should put their money in a bank account

1 reason because it might get stolen do you want to be homeless? Do you know There's people holding money that's getting stolen do you want that to happen to you? would  that be so heartbroken having to hear people money getting stolen  on the news. If I was you I would put my money in a bank account

2 reason why you should put your money in a bank account why is so you won't be poor.

You could die fast getting all of your money stolen.

3 reason why you should put your money in a bank account  is because your dreams that you always wanted to happen might not come true because your money's getting stolen would that be so disappointing for summary I think people should put there money in a bank acount