Sunday, 9 April 2017
Wednesday, 5 April 2017
WALT to write persuasive writing about what we are learning
I think people should not throw their rubbish away first reason why cause if you throw your rubbish in the sea it will poison water, fish would die and the other creatures in the sea. Second reason Did you know hazardous waste can wreck the environment? And did you know it burns easily?. Like plastic bags, cardboard, I reckon people should not chuck their rubbish!!!!! Away.!! third reason organic waste is pretty helpful You can use them to feed the pigs. And It could be made compost I agree that we should recycle our rubbish, so we can have a clean earth with not much
Rubbish do you agree or disagree.
Monday, 3 April 2017
Tuesday, 21 March 2017
Wednesday, 1 March 2017
Here is our slideshow about tikanga.
WALT think about creative ways to
promote and teach our values. We were creative because we made the ninjas move.
I learnt how to make an animation.
Our next step is to screen cast to make our characters talk.
promote and teach our values. We were creative because we made the ninjas move.
I learnt how to make an animation.
Our next step is to screen cast to make our characters talk.
Monday, 20 February 2017
A ride to Wellington
What I can work on to improve my writing
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Vocabulary
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My goal is to use interesting words (adjectives ,verbs onomatopoeia, simile)
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Ideas
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Add more detail to my ideas (describe what I thought, did, heard saw) and make sure I finish my writing with my thoughts about the day
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Punctuation
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My goal is to be better at my full stops in the right place. Remember capital letter for place names.
And question marks
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this is my holiday recount. I tried to proof. read my own writing
In the holidays we were going to Wellington with my mum and my brother and I. were going Wellington to visit my nan. It was boring in the car traveling all we got to do is sit there and wait. A little while we stopped for a brake. I had a big screech I couldn't wait till we get there. When we nearly got to Auckland I was getting hot. so I whined the window down. I felt tired I saw the Sky tower there was a lot of traffic. I said to my mum are we nearly there she said you always say that then I went on my phone to check the time.
But I forgot to put it on 12 hour clock so I went on the settings to do it.
Then I got tired and went to sleep. When I woke up I said to my mum how long did I sleep for she said like 10 minutes it felt long as. After it was cold as ice.
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