unprotected beaches are the worst in the world

WALT use language features of persuasive writing

To be successful I will:

Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting

Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

     

I know I can write rhetorical questions because I write them in my persuasive writing I know my emotive words. emotive words are words that try to make you happy or sad

Marine reserves In my opinion I believe marine reserves are a good idea. First reason  so we can have clean beaches instead of  beaches with lots of rubbish. Do you want a beach clean or do you want a beach that's filthy? One thing about Marine reserves you can't  fish or take anything away.  My second reason I think Marine reserves are good because there  will be more fish in the sea  I reckon  the government should give more protected beaches  and they are a good place to go diving to see the fish swimming and to see the sea life. I think marine reserve is magnificent place,  And  if you see a unprotected you will feel disappointed I think snorkels people will be  overjoyed if they were in a marine reserve Do you think the same?