What I can work on to improve my writing
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Vocabulary
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My goal is to use interesting words (adjectives ,verbs onomatopoeia, simile)
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Ideas
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Add more detail to my ideas (describe what I thought, did, heard saw) and make sure I finish my writing with my thoughts about the day
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Punctuation
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My goal is to be better at my full stops in the right place. Remember capital letter for place names.
And question marks
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this is my holiday recount. I tried to proof. read my own writing
In the holidays we were going to Wellington with my mum and my brother and I. were going Wellington to visit my nan. It was boring in the car traveling all we got to do is sit there and wait. A little while we stopped for a brake. I had a big screech I couldn't wait till we get there. When we nearly got to Auckland I was getting hot. so I whined the window down. I felt tired I saw the Sky tower there was a lot of traffic. I said to my mum are we nearly there she said you always say that then I went on my phone to check the time.
But I forgot to put it on 12 hour clock so I went on the settings to do it.
Then I got tired and went to sleep. When I woke up I said to my mum how long did I sleep for she said like 10 minutes it felt long as. After it was cold as ice.
