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Monday 10 April 2017

unprotected beaches are the worst in the world

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
To be successful I will:
Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

     
I know I can write rhetorical questions because I write them in my persuasive writing I know my emotive words. emotive words are words that try to make you happy or sad

Marine reserves In my opinion I believe marine reserves are a good idea. First reason  so we can have clean beaches instead of  beaches with lots of rubbish. Do you want a beach clean or do you want a beach that's filthy? One thing about Marine reserves you can't  fish or take anything away.  My second reason I think Marine reserves are good because there  will be more fish in the sea  I reckon  the government should give more protected beaches  and they are a good place to go diving to see the fish swimming and to see the sea life. I think marine reserve is magnificent place,  And  if you see a unprotected you will feel disappointed I think snorkels people will be  overjoyed if they were in a marine reserve Do you think the same?

 

Wednesday 5 April 2017

WALT to write our goals on google slides

WALT to write persuasive writing about what we are learning

I think people should not throw their rubbish away first reason why cause  if you throw your rubbish in the sea  it will   poison  water, fish would die and the other creatures in the sea. Second  reason Did you know hazardous waste can wreck the environment?  And did you know it  burns easily?. Like plastic bags, cardboard, I reckon people should not chuck their  rubbish!!!!! Away.!!  third reason  organic waste is pretty helpful You can use them to feed the pigs. And It could be made compost I agree that we                                                                                                                should recycle our rubbish, so we can have a clean earth with              not much

                    Rubbish  do you agree or disagree.