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Tuesday 26 September 2017

Past present future

Dont be a bully

WALT know the movie making process To be successful: I have confidence and speak loud. and have props ready for the movie the part I found hard was acting the part I found easy was writing the script what I learnt doing that movie is being more confident. and I enjoyed being in the movie.
WALT to use place value to be successful: I will listen in lessons and ask freinds

Monday 25 September 2017

Persuasive writing

WALT write Persuasive writing about what were are learn
to be successful: I will listen in lesson search on google
what I found hard was my reasons
what I found easy was my summary

IN my opinion I think people should put their money in a bank account


1 reason because it might get stolen do you want to be homeless? Do you know There's people holding money that's getting stolen do you want that to happen to you? would  that be so heartbroken having to hear people money getting stolen  on the news. If I was you I would put my money in a bank account
2 reason why you should put your money in a bank account why is so you won't be poor.
You could die fast getting all of your money stolen.




3 reason why you should put your money in a bank account  is because your dreams that you always wanted to happen might not come true because your money's getting stolen would that be so disappointing for summary I think people should put there money in a bank acount

PARTS OF SPEECH


WALT to know the parts of speech to be successful: I will Use google my class site ask the people in my class and listen in lessons My thing I found hard was one of the parts of speech and that was adjective the one found easy was conjunct

Monday 11 September 2017

At work

On Monday morning I wearily get out of bed and head to work.
At 1:30 7 days a Week in China as I walked into the factory I walked slowly so I didn't have to go to work quick. I felt lots of thumping my teeth felt like a rocket about to blast. it smelt like the fumes of a car it looked like a I was in a horror movie I felt like leaving I was so hot I couldn't even breath properly It felt like I was about to puke.  I felt so tired I said.  I should of  had much more for breakfast  I could hear the drilling  noise. later the
buzzer

goes off. It is as as loud as a train  it's time for lunch. I couldn't wait Finally, it is 10:00 pm.I was jumping up and down like a frog yipee I said I can
finish work and go to sleep. I. It felt like i'm about to faint I wish I Could disappear. And then finally i'm finished I said”. Then my eyes slid shut